Jasmine Hart

Oh Via. You poor thing. I read this about a week ago, but it upset me too much for me to comment. Now, I'm not going to re-read it as ...

My poetry tends to be dark and depressing. Happy poetry doesn't tend to be as effective for me (check out my poetry month thread if you need proof!). Now, however, ...

Hmmm...I'm not so sure about this one Matt. Usually I love your stuff but I think this lacked your usual power. I find that a lot of what attracts me ...

Tempest Rydia was just as trusting and naive as she had been at sixteen, when last Tempest saw her. She'd have presumed time would have erratiacted Rydia's faith in others, ...

When I click on my review tab a load of reviews come up for pieces I didn't write. There doesn't seem to be consistency between who the authors of the ...

The title is great.Your language is brilliant as usual Clau. You have some beautiful phrases here. I especially liked; "field of feline flowers where the blades pierce and the whiskers ...

Tempest Tempest pressed her lips together. She was about to argue, but then the shadows began seeping into her mind. "There have always been spirits, Rydia", she told her wearily. ...

This has been inactive for almost a month. Would someone mind posting to get it going again? I'd do it myself but I made the last post. Jas

May: (Ya, I have one day left...but I'm not expecting miracles.) 1) Novel neglected 2)Journaling largely neglected 3)Um...like one poem. 4)Submitted nothing.But did have a poem commended. 5) There's b

Abigail It was kind of Julian to offer to go to the dance. I was sure that I was not the best of company. Still, I was in no humour ...

Tempest "I haven't seen anyone either," she sighed. "People are very good at disappearing when they want to." She smiled to herself. That was one of her skills, in more ...

This is really great. I love how you express yourself, and it flows beautifully. I especially enjoyed; "I tango in-between your fingertips." and "You play me like a saxophone, your ...

I really love it. The idea is interesting and well expressed.I especiallu enjoyed; "Who’d have thought soapy spoons, forks, and knives would remind me so much of love?" and "but ...

The cherry-blossom petals are falling like tears into my hair. This is not just some lovers' tryst in a world of Snow Whites, with the fear-hungry birds coming so close ...

This is really great Kit. It's fresh and interesting, I love your use of pauses and the likes, and think the two voices work well alone and together. I'm being ...